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你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点，用5个规范的英语句子写一份长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括全部信息要点，介绍的开头已给了，不计入5个句子中。 1.有两千多年的历史 2.世界上最长的城墙，长6000多千米。 3.建筑材料主要为石头，砖头，修建工作都是人工进行。主要用于防御外来入侵者，沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台（watchtower） 4.世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。 Analyze the information 1. What kind of composition should you write? narrative (记叙), expository (说明文), argumentative(议论) 2. What tenses should you use? 3. What sentence patterns can you employ ? how about the key words and the transitional words and conjunctions? Some useful expressions needed 长城： 有……历史 长6,000公里 人工作的 防御 入侵者 每隔几百米 旅游景点 Re-organize the information 1. 最长，6000公里 2. 有2000年的历史 3. 材料,人工的。 4. 作用，有烽火台 5. 世界景点之一，游客 考查内容: 基本的语言表达能力和基本的写作技巧.如: 1)用词的合理性 2)句子结构的复杂度 3)语法运用的正确性 4)信息内容的完整性 5)句子之间的连贯性 6)整理信息和组词造句成文的能力 Mark your writing 1. Have you covered all the points? 2. Are you writing English sentences? 3. Are there any transitional words or conjunctions? 4. Are there grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes? 5. What’s your impression of it? Plain, dull, impressive or persuasive? ladies and Gentlemen. Welcome to the Great Wall. ①The Great Wall, ______ is more than 6,000 kilometers______, is the longest wall in the world. ② It has _____________more than 2,000 years. ③It is ____________ stone and brick and almost all the construction was done _____________ without ______________. ④ As the wall was built to ______________________ foreign invaders, there were watchtowers _____few hundred meters along the wall. ⑤Now, the Great wall is one of the most famous _____________ in China and it _________________every year. 常用连贯短文的过渡词语 表列举: First/ Second/ Third/ Fourth/Last 表递进: besides, what’s more, in addition, What’s worse, furthermore 表转折: but, however 发表看法: in my opinion/ view, personally speaking, as fast as I am concerned 表对比: while, on the other hand 其他: Generally speaking To be honest Frankly speaking As for sb./sth. * * the Great Wall have a history of be 6,000kms long by hand defend against invaders every few hundred meters