《口语班写作课.pptVIP

考试作文 哈尔滨医科大学 瞿平 图画类（难度最大） 1．Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.2．Give your comments. 7、1997： 托福新题型 新型的写作考试趋势 听力+写作 一、 书信类应用文 2、2005真题：辞职信＋道歉信 Directions: Two months ago, you got a job as an editor for the magazine Fashion Design. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology. 国内作文的评分标准 A节 应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域（指在书面和口语表达中根据不同的交际对象，所采用的话语方式，即正式、一般、非正式的话语）的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词，但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。 B节 B节作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的连贯组织性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。 2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有1－3分的调节分。 3、A节作文的字数要求是100词左右。B节作文的字数要求是160－200词。文章长度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。 4、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 5、如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 1结构 2句子 3词汇 4内容 奖励分给分原则 书法笔迹 大字vs小字 笔的选择 奖励分给分原则 正确正规可读 非正规标记：, Vs, etc. 简写的问题：WTO？ World Trade Organization (WTO) ^_^ 共200字！ 奖励分给分原则 标点的问题 随意点 逗号的问题 句号的问题 省略号 顿号 书名号 惊叹号和问号 奖励分给分原则 修改的问题 尽量不修改 反对对于内容的修改 正确的修改方法 修正液 范文分析 98.1母鸡下蛋，虚假承诺 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should: 1 write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon此提纲应分为两段写作） 2 give your comments 描述图画＋阐释寓意＋给出评论（解决方法） 范文分析 The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that a variety of ?promises have been arising from all walks of life?. Regrettably, quite a lot of promises are sheer nonsense, just as the hen in the given cartoon commits herself to lay eggs which are round without any angles and corners and have shells, egg whites and yolks. 范文分析 Odds and funny as they sound, such false promises can be seen and heard everywhere in our country. Administration departments assure to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribes; manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality; commercial enterprises swear to provide genuine commodities and polite and enthusiastic services. Can yo