Chapter2,翻译的过程,2014.例析.ppt

(3) the School of the air (4) South Africa / south Africa (5) uniformed / uninformed (3) the School of the air 广播学校（误：空军学校） (4) South Africa / south Africa 南非 / 非洲南部 (5) uniformed / uninformed 统一的,一致的 /未被通知的 （6）Left-handed mustache cups were also available. 改译：此处也备有左撇子专用的胡子 杯。 左撇子专用的胡子杯也可以买（找 到。） 4.4 Overcome tranlationese (克服翻译腔) There are several kinds of translationese, they are : Wrong collocation　词不搭配(原文可以搭配的词在译文中不一定能搭配) Difficult to understand,　令人费解 Misexpression,　表达失误 Affected by source language　受到原语的干扰 e.g. (1) Restricting communication and distorting information are symptoms of short-range thinking. 改译：限制交流和歪曲信息是目光短浅 的表现。 (2) I can’t see any real basis for marriage except in terms of its being a mechanical unit, that society must have to exist. 原译：关于婚姻，在我看来它只不过是一个机械的单位，此外，我看不出它有任何真正的基础。而这样的机械单位是社会存在所必需的。 改译：我认为婚姻无非就是为了建立由丈夫妻子组成的家庭，这个社会赖以存在的家庭。 (3) In the last two years, motorbikes darting around with pizza have been growing in numbers on Tokyo streets. Delivery in 30 minutes is guaranteed, or the customer gets about 5 dollars back. 　原译：过去两年里，在东京街头到处横冲直撞忙于送比萨饼上门的摩托车日益增加。他们保证３０分钟送到，否则顾客可得折合约５美元的赔偿。 　 (3) In the last two years, motorbikes darting around with pizza have been growing in numbers on Tokyo streets. Delivery in 30 minutes is guaranteed, or the customer gets about 5 dollars back. 　改译：过去两年里，飞奔在东京街头送比萨饼上门的摩托车的数量一直在增加。他们的承诺是３０分钟送货上门，否则顾客可以得到约５美元的赔偿。 （5）Anyone who plays with life will achieve nothing; anyone who cannot control himself will be a slave forever. 原译：任何玩世不恭的人都必将一事无成，任何不能控制自己的人都将是奴隶。 改译：谁玩世不恭，谁就一事无成；谁不能主宰自己，谁就会沦为奴隶。 （6）That’s a thing that might happen to anyone. 原译：这样的事可能发生在任何人身上。 改译：这种事谁也难免。 句子翻译练习 1. To many Americans, China is still a faraway place —— unknown, unseen and fascinating. 仍然有许多美国人觉得中国远在天涯海角，鲜为人知，令人心驰神往。 2. He received this information with the utmost calmness and unconcern. 听到这话他镇定自若，无所牵挂。 Usually there