2014届高考英语二轮专题复习精编专项课件写作.pptVIP

1） 顺序 sequence firstly, secondly, finally, last but not least, for one thing, for another, meanwhile… 2） 因果 cause and effect because, for, now that, as a result (of), therefore, thus… 3） 对比 contrast instead, however, while, on the contrary, in contrast, nevertheless, but on the other hand… 4）递进 addition what’s more, moreover, furthermore, besides, in addition to, to make things worse… 5）个人观点 personal opinions in one’s opinion, from my point of view, as far as I am concerned, to be honest… 6）概括 summary in a word, in short, in conclusion, to sum up… * In your opinion, what makes for a good essay? 高考英语作文第五档(很好)要求:(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 a good essay 1. 使用较高级的词汇 3. 使用恰当的连接词 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。 使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。 2. 使用较丰富的句式 Using advanced words 1. 多实少虚 : nice 2. 短语优先： I cannot bear it. I want it. generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, easygoing I cannot put up with it. I am looking forward to it. ３.弃旧取新: There are potential safety dangers. There exist potential safety dangers. 1.We all think he is a great man. We all ____________________ him . The plan _____________ to be a failure. Our school _____________________________ twenty–six classrooms. speak highly of turned out is made up of / consists of 2. As a result the plan was a failure. 3. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. Practice 1 4. You can find my house easily. You’ll ______________________finding my house. A good idea __________________________ me. have no difficulty in I suddenly ________________a good idea.. occurred to / struck came up with 5. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 6.Because the weather was good, our journey was pleasant. ___________the good weather, ou