2014届高考英语二轮专题复习系列精品书面表达专项训练课件.pptVIP

Practice makes perfect! Let’s have a try! 书写潦草、字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，得 分 0 卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言 错误多;层次不清;得 分 5 （南京2011年二模)请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面： 1. 描述这幅漫画的内容。 2. 是否同意他们的教育方式, 并陈述理由。 3. 对家庭教育提出建议。 注意：1. 词数：150左右。 2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 3. 参考词汇： 溺爱 spoil v. As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. ______________________________________ ____________________________________________ （2011年江苏卷）下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容： ①描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等； ②结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想； ③举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。 注意： ①可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示， 作必要的发挥想象； ②词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总 词数； ③作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. ______________________________________ 2013年盐城、南京一模 Homework * * * * * Improve your Composition Description of a cartoon or picture ---高考作文指导 （徐州一中 ） 小 结 15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里？ What makes a good composition? Discussion Everything needed included Good beginning and ending Well organized and smoothly developed Proper linking words between sentences and paragraphs Describing a picture 1. What does the picture say and reflect? 2. How can we express the idea(s) properly in English? Problems： 读图与立意 ?参考词汇：hogwash oil 地沟油 The use of hogwash oil and poisonous rice in restaurants has already raised a wide range of social concern. 细节 寓意 细节 寓意 The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards. 读图与立意 细节 问题 Two snails are joking about the cars on the overcrowded roads, which reflects that heavy traffic jam has been a problem. 读图与立意 读图与立意 细节 寓意 Positive people always see an opportunity in every difficulty, while pessimistic people are always taking a negative view of opportunities． 细节 寓意 Don’t copy other’s way of solving the problem. Do everything in the right w