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[最新六年高考英语满分作文及评析04
最新六年高考英语满分作文及评析(04-09)
2009高考英语满分作文
【全国卷I海南、宁夏】 ks5u
【试题回放】假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条,内容包括: Ks5u
1.外出购物 Ks5u
2.替房东还书 Ks5u
3.Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消 Ks5u
2)此事已告知Susan Ks5u
3) 尽快回电 Ks5u
注意:1. 词数100左右; Ks5u
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson, Ks5u
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Ks5u
Yours,
Li Hua
Ks5u
[名师点评] Ks5u
本文属于提纲式要点作文,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确,各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开头要开门见山。
【北京卷】ks5u
【试题回放】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班四月十二日去郊区植树,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意:词数不少于60
提示词:郊区 suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【名师点评】
本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文,与环保结合,立意较好。文章思路清晰,要点连贯,在语言的表达上选词新颖,同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
【北京卷】ks5u
【试题回放】开放作文
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于50
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and ex
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