英语作文给的一封信 .docVIP

Dear manager, My name is Li Mengran ,a college student. I would like to apply for a summer job which can let me gain useful experience. I hear that you need a Lab assistant. I want to say I like this job. I study in DeZhou university. My major is Chemical. In my course, experiment is very important. So as a Chemical student, we need do many experiments. And I study hard in college, I get many glorious champion. In college, I get a chance to enter a competition of Chemical experiment. I get Second Place Award. Through I work hard, I pass the CET 4. And now I plan CET 6. As a girl, I have a ability of strict. I think this ability is very important in experiment. I hope I can catch this chance. In one hand, I can learn more knowledge, In another hand, I hope I can share responsibility for your job, let you relax. I promise if I get this job I will study hard and try my best do well . Looking forward to your early reply. . 1.1 3th May, 2012 Dear manager, My name is Li Mengran , a college student. [教师点评] [学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。?? college: 多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。university: 主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。institute: 指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。school: 指大学所属的学院或系。academy: 指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。 好评 报错 1.2 I would like to apply for a summer job which can let me gain useful experience. [教师点评] [搭配统计] 动名搭配 gain...experience 在语料库中出现过 542 次?? experience 前面的动词分布 , gain 后面的名词分布make...experience,acquire...experience,gather...experience,win...experience,earn...experience,derive...experience 好评 报错 [学习提示] 易混词汇: use, apply, employ, utilize, avail, exploit 均含“使用，应用”之意。?? use: 普通用词，着重为达到某一目的而利用某人或某物。apply: 指将一事物运用于另一事物之上以发挥其有效作用。employ: 指使用处于消极状态或未被用过的人或物，可以与use换用，但强调进行选择、充分利用。utilize: 侧重有利可图或能达到某一实际目的。书面用词。avail: 通常指使用手边或就近的人或物以有利于自己。exploit: 强调充分利用。 好评 报错 1.3 I hear that you need a Lab assistant. [教师点评] [搭配统计] 动名搭配 need...assistant 在语