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【素材示例】 Importance of being busy 认真仔细观察该图画,就忙碌的日常生活展开联想,并发表自己的观点看法。 审题构思: 篇章结构: 内容要点: 拟关键词: 构建句式: 【佳作播报】 Sometimes life becomes so busy that you feel as if you are the only person to whom the whole world has been merciless and that you are the only person who is working harder than anyone else.Yes,the grass on the other side of the fence is always greener and fresher. However,the more things one has to do or one is into,the greater the involvement in a mental,physical or social way in these things.①Due to this,ones own personal problems are out of sight②,because all the time ones mind is thinking of completing the undertaken tasks.Problems,once they are out of sight,are out of mind. Each thing that we do adds a new dimension to our personality.It shapes our thinking and makes us more organized,experienced,knowledgeable and creative.The time and sweat that we put in every day into our tasks is the brick and mortar of our future.So friends,it is always better to be busy than idle. 【赏文酌句】 本文采用总分总的结构。第一段首句使用so...that...句型,强调现代生活的忙碌程度。 第二段以However开头,笔锋一转,指出忙碌使一个人投入到所做的每一件事都会对我们有好处。谚语和名言的使用,起到画龙点睛的作用。 第三段第二句以四个并列的形容词深化观点。全文短小精悍,正文没有出现importance,却将忙碌的重要性和意义论述得入情入理。 【佳句模拟】 1.the+比较级...,the+比较级...越……越…… [模拟] The truth of life is that the more you want the less you get. 生活的真谛就是你想要的越多,反而得到的就越少。 2.out of sight看不见了,不让人看见 [模拟] They looked for the cyclist but he was already out of sight. 他们找那个骑自行车的人,但是已经看不见他了。 佳句背诵 Now more and more people become aware that those disasters have much to do with what we have done to the earth.现在,越来越多的人开始认识到,这些灾害与我们对地球的所作所为有很大关系。 This months floods are among the worst in South China since 1998, when over 3,600 people were killed and more than 20 million displaced. 本月所爆发的洪水是中国南方1998年以来最严重的,当时3600多人遇难,2千多万人无家可归。 The rainstorm has left 13 dead, 23 missing in this town so far.到目前为止,这次暴雨使这个城镇13人
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