写作常见错.pptVIP

四级辅导 专题－写作常见错误分析 中式英语(Chinglish) 例1. Finally, there are more and more requirements of computers because of the development of society. 正确：Finally, there is an increasing demand for computers with the development of society. 一致问题 一致问题主要指主谓不一致，数的不一致、时态不一致及代词指代不一致等问题。 例1：There is a growing tendency these years for the everage of hours a college student spend on the computer per week. 剖析：主谓语不一致, a college student是单数第三人称，因而本句中的 spend应改为spends. 正确：There is an upward tendency these years of the average of hours a a college student spends on the computer per week. 例2： But in 2002, it has risen to 14 hours. 剖析：时态不一致，in 2002为具体过去时间，应用一般过去时。 正确： But in 2002, it rose to 14 hours. 误置修饰语(Misplaced Modifiers) 同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的意义可能会发生变化。 例1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末。 本句应改为：I believe I can do it well and I will know the world outside the campus better.例2. They only sleep late on Sundays.剖析：only位置不当。 本句可改为：They sleep late only on Sundays.  残缺句(Sentence Fragments) 书面语要求句子结构完整，意思表达清楚。 例1：In 1990, less than two hours that a student spends on the computer per week. 正确：In 1990, a student spends less than two hours on the computer per week。 例2：However, increased to 12 in 2000. 剖析：无主语。 正确：However, the figure increased to 12 in 2000. 悬垂修饰语(Dangling Modifiers) 悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。 例1：To do well in college, good grades are essential. 剖析：句中不定式短语“to do well in college”的逻辑主语不清楚。 可改为：To do well in college, a student needs good grades. 例2：Having admitted to the college, most of his time was spent writing and reading. 剖析：本句有两个明显错误。 (1)句首悬垂修饰语中“admit to”意义应为“被录取”，因此，要用被动语态。 (2)主句应该用表“人”的名词或代词作主语，句意才符合逻辑。 可改为：Having been admitted to the college, he spends most of his time writing and reading. 例3：Constantly contacting the society, our knowledge will be improved. 剖析：接触社会的是“人”，因而，这个句子的主语应是“接触社会的人”，而不该是“