四六级写作解析.ppt

作文要求 1.审题和构思的要求： 结构模版化（理性人类的逻辑套路） 内容面筋化（由博返约，简明扼要） 2.写作行文的要求： 语言规范，有亮点更好。 句子多变。该简则简，该繁则繁。 作文段落举例 1.健康的重要性（主题句） 2.正面论述主题（扩展句1） 3.反面论述主题（扩展句2） 4.结论句 1.主题句 It is important for everyone of us to keep healthy in our daily lives. 2.扩展句（1） People with good health will work with confidence and their progress in work in turn contributes to their health and happiness. 3.扩展句（2） A sick person is usually not interested in everything around him and therefore loses many opportunities to be successful. 4.结论句 There is no doubt that health is of great importance to us 段落扩展的三种方法 1.正反论证法 2.因果关系法 3.列举法 一、主题句（段首句）作文 段首句作文也称主题句作文或起始句作文，除给出题目外，还给出每一段的第一句或第一句的开头部分，要求续写并完成段落。因此考生必须审清题意 ，正确理解段首句，以段首句为线索，确定段落的扩展方式合理安排材料和细节。 Project Hope 1. Project Hope is an urgent measure that our government has taken to help poor children in China who cannot afford to go to school. 2. This project is of great importance to our country. 3. In my opinion, 分析：这篇文章的主题思想是，“希望工程”对我国的建设具有重大的意义。第一段的段首句是“希望工程”的定义。要拓宽这个定义，续写内容应放在“希望工程”的作用、目的、意义上。第二段主题句的核心词是“important”。扩展句应从国家建设、教育的角度来论述“希望工程”的重大意义。第三段的段首给出“In my opinion”这一介词短语，提醒我们这一段应阐述自己对“希望工程”的看法。但要注意紧扣主题思想，避免离题。 参考范文： ①Project Hope is an urgent measure that our government has taken to help poor children in China who cannot afford to go to school. ②The project aims at providing children from poor families with tuition fees and setting up new schools in poor areas.　③This project is of great importance to our country. ④In the first place, it brings great hope to thousands of children from poor families. ⑤Secondly, as most children have access to education, it will lead to the improvement of the intelligence level in our country. ⑥Thus the project will benefit the modernization of our country .　⑦In my opinion, the project has a great influence on the construction of our country. ⑧A country’s development largely depends on the educational level of the people. ⑨T