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2016届四川省南江县高考英语书面表达（二轮）赏析新编（6） 2016书面表达训练 Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay on the topic of loving our parents. Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed. 2. Draw a conclusion and give your comments on the cartoon. 3. Word limit: 100-- 120 words. 【参考范文】 As is vividly shown in the picture, old parents are sitting at table, disappointed. Although they receive a lot of presents from their children, no one comes back to celebrate with them. They feel very miserable and have no appetite, since what they want most is not such material stuffs but the care and love from their children and grandchildren. Nowadays, young men look so busy and independent in modern society that they will never feel free to live with their parents. They move out and mind their own business every day. On usual days, they would not like to take their time to visit their parents with the excuses of busyness. On some festival days, they probably share a little time to drop in on their parents or even just send some presents but don’t show up personally like what the cartoon above illustrates. They think that presents can represent their love, however, to the parents, who overcame a lot of difficulties to bring them up, those stuffs are far from what they really hope for. Therefore, however busy we may be, we should spend more time accompanying our parents. Considering their selfless love, we should return them the same from the bottom of our heart. 【广东省高三考前冲刺卷基础写作(共1小题，满分15分) 今天是九月九日重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)，你作为志愿者和班上的其他同学到养老院去慰问老人，以下是今天的主要活动： 1．向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡……)； 2．为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天……)。 写作内容 请你写一篇日记，包括以下内容 1．记录当天的活动； 2．发表自己的感想。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，语篇连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 基础写作参考范文September 9th,2011 Today is the Double Ninth Festival，the traditional Chin