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Is she ?晕轮效应又称“光环效应”，属于心理学范畴，是指当认知者对一个人的某种特征形成好或坏的印象后，他还倾向于据此推论该人其他方面的特征。本质上是一种以偏概全的认知上的偏误。dirtycleanmessyovermoderateneat字数 number of words3not too many or too few格式 format2neat and clear 1书写 handwritingstandard and clean1书写 handwriting字母书写规范字母大小合适卷面布白均匀倾斜度一致留白2格式 format3字数 number of words假设你是李华，现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室（dormitory）规定，如不整理床铺，休息时间大声拨打电话，未经许可（permission）动用他人物品，离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯，做个文明室友，你决定写一封电子邮件给他。要求：（1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；（2）字数：60-80词（信得开头和结尾已给出，不介入总词数）；（3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名，学校名和地名。参考词汇：respect each other 互相尊重therefore 因此obey the rules 遵守规定without permission 未经允许Dear Wang Ming,　I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What’s more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Don’t make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Don’t use others’ things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.Best wishes,LiHua85113　I’m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What’s more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Don’t make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Don’t use others’ things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.10行每行10个字；8行每行12个字不宜太多不宜太少10*10/ 8*12字数 number of words结构清楚三段式总分总3格式 format2书写规范大小合适布白均匀1书写 handwriting“Outer beauty” comes first!If another opportunity is given, one of my colleagu