开放式作文指导Free Writing学习指导书.pptVIP

Teaching aim: how to help the Ss write such composition Teaching difficulty: how to check over the requirement and give reasonable explanations to support the argument.  Teaching methods: ?a step-by-step approach 开放作文 （15分） 字数要求：词数不少于60 开放作文评分:以内容和语言定档定分 ◆ 立意明确，逻辑清晰 (立意-----细节描述） ◆ 语言达意 第四档（12—15）很好地达到总体要求。 有效结合材料，观点明确； 内容连贯、条理清晰； 语法运用得体，词汇丰富，几乎没有语言错误。 第三档（ 8—11）基本达到总体要求。 有效结合材料，观点基本明确； 内容基本连贯，有一定的条理性； 语言运用基本得体，有少量错误，但能表达观点。 第二档（4—7）未达到总体要求。 未有效结合材料； 内容松散，条理性较差； 语言运用较差，错误较多，但基本能表达观点。 第一档（1—3）未达到总体要求。 未结合材料； 内容混乱，缺乏条理性； 语言运用差，错误很多，严重影响观点表达。 本次作文的主要问题 1、审题： 看不懂材料，造成立意错误。 游离于材料，造成主次混淆。 2、写作技巧： 大篇幅复制原材料，造成入题迟缓。 展开议论时，只见干条款，不见阐释，造成议论空洞 3、思维能力： 比较简单，不够活跃。 4、语言基本功： 单词，语法，语句错误多。 5 书写潦草 导文1: 评分，寻主要病根 通看两文，寻近日写作中的高频语法和语言错误 Have a try ! Homework : 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于60。 In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it. Describe a picture（描图） From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is drawing a line with great effort. The picture is more than what it can show us. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show respect for them. There be带后定 定词性（名形；动副；系形/名） 动短配对 谓求完 名定数 文2 文1 a good news and hope share its beauty to should gives wish …becomes… with could become There are so many people hope to perform … who hope to become more goodlook appealing hoping give 导文3: 评分; 加过渡词，让全文锦上添花 表导入： according to， in my opinion， as far as