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For example, you can begin the passage like this: Spring is a hopeful and lovely season… Assignment： Complete the passage in various sentence patterns. Thanks! How to Make Your Writing Better  Example 1 (On Ss’Page1 ) The First Snow It is snowing!! I shouted to my mum. When I was doing my homework, I found that it was snowing outside. The snow was so white and beautiful. It seemed that this was the first snow of this winter. I went out of the room and looked at the sky. It was very beautiful. Every thing was white . But my mother took me back home very soon. I wont forget this day. Example 1 1. The passage is mainly about______. How and why the first snow came How the first snow impressed the writer Why Mother took the writer back home √ 2. The writer’s feeling was ______. sad B. cold C. happy √ Example 1 (On Ss’Page1 ) The First Snow It is snowing!! I shouted to my mum. When I was doing my homework, I found that it was snowing outside. The snow was so white and beautiful. It seemed that this was the first snow of this winter. I went out of the room and looked at the sky. It was very beautiful. Every thing was white . But my mother took me back home very soon. I wont forget this day. It is snowing!! I shouted to my mum. Example 1 3. Most of the sentences are______. simple sentences B. co-ordinate sentences (并列句) C. subordinate sentences(复合句) √ Simple sentences are often very short and they are very essential (必需的，特有的，基本的 )to make the writing good. Example 1 Simple sentences 1.S+link V.+Pre. It was very beautiful. Everything was white . 2. S+Vi. It is snowing!! 3.S+V+O I wont forget this day. I shouted to my mum. 4.S+V+O+O.C. We asked him to come back . 5.S+V+Sb.+Sth Mum bought me a new dress. Example 2 (On Ss’Page1 ) The First Snow The first snow came. How beautif