2014届高考英语二轮复习模拟高考写作训练33.docVIP

2014届高考英语二轮复习模拟高考写作训练33 Ⅲ.短文改错 My classmate Liu Hong is an warm-hearted girl.She is good at studying，dancing and playing piano.After hear Sichuan earthquake，she felt very sad about it.She decided to do something to helping Sichuan people.First she calls her friends up and came up with having a benefit show.Then she handed out advertisement with her friends or put up signs asking people to watch.Luckily she did very good.A lot of people were moved and gave their hands to Sichuan people.At the last，she raised 5,000 yuan.She gave up all the money to the quake-hit areas. 答案　 My classmate Liu Hong