浙江宁波市高考英语二轮：短文改错精炼2答案.docVIP

2016浙江宁波市高考英语二轮：短文改错精炼（2）答案 短文改错 　　The day before the speech contest (比赛) English teacher1. _______ 　　talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all 2. _______ 　　wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would 3. _______ 　　win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt 4. _______ 　　so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many 5. _______ 　　people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English 6. _______ 　　teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at 7. _______ 　　me. I remembered her words and calm down. 8. _______ 　　I did a good job and won the first prize. 　　Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.9. _______ 　　Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. 10. ______ 　　答案及解析 　　1. teacher 前加 my。根据下行 She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success， 可判断 English teacher 应是特指。 　　2. schoolmate 改为 schoolmates。因本句中有 all 一词， 所以 schoolmate 一词应为复数形式。 　　3. that 改为 whether。根据上下文， 可判断本句意为“我是否成功没有关系”， 所以这里用 whether。 　　4. 此行无错。 　　5. as 改为 that。根据句子结构， so 应与 that 构成复合句， that 引导结果状语从句， 在此不能用 as 引导。 　　6. 删去a。catch sight of 为固定搭配， sight 前不加任何冠词。 　　7. but 改为 and。smiling 和 nodding 为两个并列动作， 在逻辑上无转折关系， 故 but 改为 and。 　　8. calm 改为 calmed。在 and 连接的两个并列句中， remember 和 calm 为两个并列动作， 为过去时态。故 calm 改为 calmed。 　　9. is 改为 are。本句用 my picture 和 the prize 作主语， 是复数形式， 后谓语动词应和其主语保持一致。 　　10. 删去often。句首已用 whenever “无论何时”， 在句中就没必要用 often 了。 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。 Miss Li is our English teacher. One day when the first bell rang，the monitor stood up and said，“Our English teacher is going to have a operation today. It has not decided yet who will take his place. ”The class all turned silently at his words. Just at this moment，Miss Li appears at the door. She looked tiring and pale. “I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow because I don’t want you to miss a single