2015届英语二轮复习 写作 夹叙夹议型读写任务.pptVIP

第三篇　写作 第三章　读写任务 第二节　读写任务写作 专题三　夹叙夹议型读写任务 夹叙夹议就是一方面叙述某一事情，另一方面又对此事加以分析与评论。这种表达方式中的叙与议是一个有机的整体，“叙”是“议”的基础，即议论不能脱离记叙，必须在记叙的基础上展开；“议”是“叙”的渗透，即议论在记叙的基础上发表，且要有一定的深度与广度。写夹叙夹议类读写任务时，思维要灵活，要随着记叙与议论的转换，及时调整思维方式。 一、观摩领悟 Friendship plays a big part in our life, just like a home where you can get relaxed.But to keep and form it needs relating and being ready to help each other. According to my experience, I think friends bring me not only trust, understanding but also warmth.Once on a weekend I fell badly ill.Unfortunately, I lived at school and my parents had no idea of my 一、观摩领悟 illness.I had thought about lying in bed all day.But one of my friends had me sent to hospital and looked after me without having a rest, which moved me a lot.It is friendship that gives me a hand when Im in trouble. As I enjoy making friends, I value friendship a lot.And I think friendship is a relationship which requires both honesty with each other and sharing. Thus, to my mind, to build up real friendship, we should make friends with those who we can trust, then take serious concerns on our friendship and always get ready to help each other. 【结构分析与解读】 本文是夹叙夹议文，文章分成四段，第一段为概括；第二段为记叙部分(根据自己的亲身经历作叙述)；第三段和第四段为议论部分，其中第三段议论的内容为对友谊的理解；第四段议论的内容为如何建立起真正的友谊。这样的安排，让阅卷老师一眼就能看到文章把要点写全了。此外，各段的笔墨分配基本上做到了有机平衡。 1．夹叙夹议型读写任务应注意的问题。 (1)开门见山，求画龙点睛。写作时，要让早已疲倦的阅卷老师不用刻意寻找就能一眼看出你的要点齐全。 (2)忠实原题，忌画蛇添足。很多同学受语文考试中作文习惯的影响，喜欢在文章末尾加上一小段，抒发情感，却往往跑题，画蛇添足。 (3)对人物、地点和主要情节的叙述要简单明了， 把心理活动、人物描述等细节略去。 二、写作指导 (4)严格区分夹叙夹议的叙事和记叙文，避免细节阐述过于繁琐而影响了故事整体的表达。 (5)议论是结合叙事部分展开，和所叙述的故事要紧密结合，可以升华也可以只谈对自己的影响和感受，但必须是“紧密结合”并且是有感而发。 2．必备词句。 常用的过渡性句子： ·My own experience is a good example of... ·Here is a case in point. 栏目链接 ·Take...for example/for instance. ·We may take a common/typical example of... ·History/Our society is filled with the examples of... ·The story is not unusual.It is one of many examples Ive ever heard/read/encountered. ·Therefore, I believed that... ·From what I have mentioned above, we can firmly draw the conclusi