高中英语北师大版选修6练习：Unit 17　Laughter 写作园地 Word版含解析.docVIP

写作园地 趣文轶事记叙文 [感悟范文] 仔细观察下面两幅图画，写一篇幽默故事，讲述“我”在星期天发生的“污水代墨”的趣事，反映“污染严重”这一主题。可以适当发挥。 注意：1.自拟题目；2.短文必须前后连贯；3.参考词汇：墨汁ink　化工厂chemical works [范文] Last Sunday I found special ink which cost nothing, which was amusing. I was doing my homework at home when I found my ink had run out. Then I hurried to a store nearby to buy a bottle of ink. On the way, I was astonished to find there was some black water in the river. I saw it flowing from the chemical works nearby, which was always pouring black water into the river. What should I do? “Wonderful！” I cried, “Why not use it as ink？” So I got some water and went home. It worked well for writing and I felt content with it. Another bright idea came into my mind. The next day I took some of my classmates to fetch more of such waste water and they all thought well of it. I think that the environment is important to everyones health. It is necessary to prevent the pollution at once. It is useful to recycle the waste as well. [技法讨论] 本单元的写作任务是写一篇自己的轶事、趣闻。那么，怎样用英语去写自己的趣闻轶事呢？写一篇个人轶事的记叙文，应注意以下几个方面的问题： 1．决定你要写什么情形，设置好故事发生的场景，交代清楚你正在做的事情、所涉及的人物以及发生了什么事。 2．按时间的发展，描述接下来发生了什么事，层次条理要分明。在进行描写时通常要将最有意义、最能表现人物思想性格的行为或事件描写清楚。 3．为使文章内容丰富，可以描述一些与此同时发生的其他事情，尽力使文章生动形象。文章要有开头、发展、结尾，这样才能使文章内容连贯、真实。 4．注意时态。通常事件发生的时间是确定时态的关键。叙述经常性的事情时，以一般现在时为主；讲述过去的事件和行为时，以一般过去时为主。 黄金表达 1. That was the worst day I have ever had when I was doing... 2. As I was waiting for a bus, a taxi passed by and splashed rainwater over me... 3. When we hurried to the station, there was a long queue and we had to wait for a long time. We got disgusted... 4. I was having a photo taken when my classmate fell into the water. Luckily, at the moment，... 5. In the end, the keeper took us to the office and we dried out Jacks clothes. 6. When we finally got home, my parents saw us funny and we all burst out laughing. 亮点分析： 亮点一：首段用一句话对故事进行了简短介绍，点明了图画的主旨： I found special ink which cost nothing, which was amusing. 亮点二：接下来的几段对故事发生的时间、地点、原因等细节进行了描述，并加入了作者自己的看法。发挥很适当、合理。 亮点三：灵活运用了多种表达，使用了一些较高级的短语及句式