作文训练——句子训练.pptVIP

完整句和不完整句 He came. She wrote a letter. Dr. Smith is a professor. 练习： Raining. How to use it? 意思完整 He came. ? He came to the classroom very early. She wrote a letter. ? She wrote a long letter to her parents. Dr. Smith is a professor. ? Dr. Smith is a well-known professor of physics. It was raining hard, they could not work in the fields. It was raining hard; they could not work in the fields. It was raining hard. They could not work in the fields. It was raining so hard that they could not work in the fields. It was raining hard, so they could not work in the fields. They could not work in the fields because it was raining hard. As it was raining hard, they could not work in the fields. 长短句 短句：语气重；陈述重要事实和想法。 长句：表达准确复杂的思想；解释观点理论；描写有细节的事物 好的句子:完整、连贯、简洁、强调 完整（句子结构、信息） Do Fu was one of the greatest poets. Do fu was one of the greatest poets of the Tang Dynasty. 2. 连贯 不连贯的句子经常： 1) 平行结构有缺点，如 A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds. ? A man is judged not only by what he says but also by what he does. ? A man is judged not only by his words but also by his deeds. We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman. We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable. We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman. 2) 代词指代不清楚 He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious. He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly hurt. She told my sister that she was wrong. “I’m wrong,” she said to my sister. She admitted that she was wrong and said so to my sister. “You’re wrong,” she said to my sister. My sister was told that she was wrong. 3) 修饰语和被修饰语的关系不明确，人称、数、语态、语气上混乱 Looking out of the window, many children are playing happily. ? Looking out of the window, he / she / I can see many children are playing happily. ? Outside the window, many children are playing happily. To get ready for the trip, all the things she needed were put into a suitcase. ? To get ready for the