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如何描写人物 写作指导 人物描写包括人物的外部特征、性格特征、思想状态、行为语言等方面，用于表现人物的精神面貌、揭露人物的内心活动、提示人物的性格变化，以突出作品的主题思想。此类写作要求抓住人物特征的具体细节进行描写，分清主次，可以采用先总体、后局部的描述顺序。即先总体介绍此人所具有的特点，然后对其局部的一些细节进行介绍，最后可以再作一些总结。另外，对于有些人物描写，我们也可以根据时间或事件发生的先后顺序进行介绍。 具体的写作技巧如下： (1)选好描写的角度。必须考虑好站在第几人称的角度上写和从哪一点着手写。 (2)详略得当地描述。要能够抓住人物特点，按要求对人物进行描写，并要注意详略得当。 (3)准确生动地描述。描写人物时还要注意语言的准确生动性，可以灵活地使用一些主动句、被动句和with的复合结构以及从句等句式。同时，也要注意准确地使用一些动词、名词、形容词、副词以及介词词组等。 经典句式 (1)介绍人物的姓名、出身 She was born in Beijing On Oct. 12th, 1986. She was a great woman with the name of... She was born to/into a poor/rich family. (2)介绍家庭背景 His/Her family was so poor that... His/Her father was very strict with him/her... (3)介绍教育背景 She was admitted to a famous university... She graduated from the Chinese Department of Beijing University. When at college, he majored in math. (4)介绍人物喜好 He is interested in/is fond of/is crazy about music. His favorite sport is playing basketball. (5)介绍人物生活态度 He works hard at/devotes his lifetime/himself to achieving his life goal. He made up his mind to do the job well. He tried his best to help others. (6)评价人物 His hard work brought him great success. He set a good example to us. He was honored as a model worker. He made great contributions to our country. 话题导入 你们学校的英语报最近开展了一次题为“My Favorite Teacher”的征文比赛。你计划报名参加，写作对象是你的英语老师Mr Green，因为他上课生动有趣，而且善于启发大家的思维，博得了同学们的喜爱。请你根据下列要点写一篇关于他的文章，参加比赛： 1．简要地描述他的外貌； 2．喜欢他的原因。 注意：词数120左右。 参考词汇：激发motivate。 ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ 参考范文 My Favorite Teacher Our English teacher Mr Green，only several years older than us，①is a really special teacher. He is very tall and has a beard, ②which makes him look serious. ③In fact, he is very kind and humorous. He seems born able to make his class full of laughter all the time, ④which explains why he is also called Magician. ③For example, during the class, he always has ways of giving us surprise, such as making a joke or singing a song and so on. So what he teaches comes natural to us. ③Wh