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写作模式（夹叙夹议类） 1) The story/accident/occurrence took place one day when… 2) As…, … so… that... 3) But… in time to… 4) The enlightenment/insight gleaned from the occurrence— … —holds much significance for our reality (意义分析). 5) With an ever-surging wave of change, as we all know, our life is now being exposed to more… than ever. 6）Although…, for example, you still…7) Much evidence shows that many of us, dazzled with…, tend to…, only to…8) So the best way out of such a dilemma is… 9) To achieve that/make it, however, there is much that must be done about… 10) The first thing of the first is…(建议I) 11) Then all there is left with us is… (建议II) 12) As long as…, nothing will distract us away from…(结论句) (附加) 4) The lesson learned from the accident is so distressing, but the most pressing for us now is to get to its root. (原因分析) 5) The primary cause for it, in my opinion, is… 6) Another cause rests with…7) And above all, … 8) So the best way to prevent such a tragedy is… Meditations Derived from Mrs. Baroda’s Story 1) Mrs. Baroda’s passion for her husband’s friend cropped up one night when she had a conversation with him under an oak tree on her plantation. 2) As he opened up his mind and unfolded his true personality before her, she felt his attraction so strong that she was eager to reach out her hand and touch him. 3) But she put an effective brake on her desire in time to keep it from getting out of hand. 4) The insight derived from this story— triumph of reason over passion—holds much significance for our reality, especially for our marital life. 5) With an ever-surging wave of change, as we all know, marriage is now being exposed to more temptations than ever. 6) Although bathed in the warmth of your love nest, for example, you still can find a person, wrapped in an air of mystery, more charming than your spouse or a style of life more exciting than yours, which is no longer as appealing to you as it was during the early years of your marriage. 7) So