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从小事做起1describe the drawing briefly，2explain its intended meaning，and then 3give your comments. 【考研1号英语范文及结构点评】 According to the cartoon， walking on the road， two men come across a small coin. Unfortunately，neither of them wants to pick it up as both think the coin is too small for them to pick up，although neither of them is in a hurry.  ①Clearly，what the cartoonist wants to convey through this picture goes far beyond a coin. ②Instead it teaches us a vivid lesson of life philosophy： Life is a series of steps. ③Success in life is founded upon attention to the small things rather than to the large things. ④A house is built one brick at a time. Football games are won a play at a time. A department store grows bigger one customer at a time. Every big accomplishment is a series of little ones.  Therefore，anyone who determines to achieve maximum success should learn the principle that progress is made one step at a time. One of the best ways to lead a successful life is simply to make a written or mental list of the things we do each day. ⑤Then we give ourselves a mental credit for each of them, however small. ⑥This will help us to focus on what we have done instead of what we haven’t got around to do. ⑦It may sound simplistic，but it works.  ①为论述图画深层含义的段首句。其中clearly 可以用 It is obvious that 或It is clear that来替换。 同类句型还有：It is obvious that the drawer of this picture wants to draw out attention towards … ②Instead表示替代，可翻译为“相反”、“而”，可位于句首或句末，位于句首时可用alternatively， on the contrary等替换。如：Mike doesn’t study at all. Instead， he sits idle all day. ③“rather than” 连接两个介词短语，表示客观事实，意为“是……而不是……；与其……不如……”。它连接的并列成分可以是名词、代词、形容词、介词（短语）、动名词、分句、不定式、动词等。如：We should help him rather than he should help us. 是我们应该帮助他而不是他应该帮助我们。 ④前三句通过三个实例，化抽象为具体，而第四句对所举事例进行总结。在写作中，考生可借鉴这种举例并提出观点的写作手法，使文章生动形象，观点令人信服。 ⑤“…however small” 等同于no matter how small （it is），however后接形容词或副词。类似结构中however， whenever， wherever是疑问副词，引导状语从句；而whoever，whiohever，whatever是疑问代词，引导名词性从句。 ⑥instead of 用法同in place of， 表示替代。其后接wh