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模板一 引语评论作文 （2011年12月新题型） 第一段：引语引用+简单评论（文章的第1、2句；引用题目中给予的原话，并对这句话的表层意思进行评论） 文章第一句话： 1）第一句的第一种写法：直接引用某位名人曾经说过的话 .sb. once said. Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe. Abraham Lincoln once said. [2011-12月CET6] 2）第一句的第二种写法：直接引用某句平常人说的话 . You must have heard these words hundreds of times from sb.… Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world, I’ve done it hundreds of times.”You must have heard these words hundreds of times probably from your father, friends or even yourself. [2011-12月CET4] 文章第二句话：对引语的表面含义进行评论(用自己的语言，解释和补充题目 的引语) 自由发挥，见真功夫 Although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laborious in the rest two hours. [2011-12月CET6] Quitting smoking is so easy as long as keep away from cigarettes. However, many people can hardly resist the temptation of smoking and then give up their attempt to quit smoking. It is obvious that without strong will and determination no one can quit smoking with ease. [2011-12月CET4] 第二段：意义阐述段（文章的第3,4,5,6四句话，都写在第二段；这是字数最多，内容最丰满的一段，称为“猪肚”） 文章第三句话：（点明引语的深层含义，从表面到深入，从局限到扩展;提炼出引语包含的中心词、主题词A） The saying/sentence aims at informing us of the significance of A in our pursuit of success. The saying aims at informing us of the significance of adequate preparation in our pursuit of success. [2011-12月CET6] The sentence aims at informing us of the significance of a strong will in our pursuit of success. [2011-12月CET4] 文章第四句话：( 上句提出了引语的深层含义，那么从第四句开始就要说明这个事物的重要 There is no denying that we can’t emphasize the importance of sth. too much. ~full preparation. [2011-12月CET6] ~a strong will. [2011-12月CET4] 文章第五句话：( 论述这个事物的重要。建议用“短句+长句”（或者“主题句”+扩展句）的方式展开！) Sth. can help people do… Full preparation can help people reduce the risk of failure, as we can adopt counter plans (预备方案) when something unexpected occurs . [2011-12月CET6] A strong will can help people achieve their goals more smoothly, as it can inspire people to approach challenges an