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书面表达中出现的问题 审题不仔细，粗枝大叶，内容与题目要求不符。 本文题目中很明确的写到“他在当地药店买二一瓶药，但由于不懂汉语，不知如何服用，因此在网上发帖（附带药品说明）向你求助。”但一些同学则写为“我给你买了一瓶药”或“我给你介绍一种药”。 用议论文的套路来写说明文。 ⑴有的同学写到了锻炼的好处。 ⑵有的同学用到first、second、third或 I am in favor of the view that。。。 等一些论文中常出现的语言知识。 3. 作文不分段。 4. 语言表达方面的问题最为突出。 ⑴.词汇错误 medicine—machine pill—pile/pupul/pie tablet—table medicine,pill,drug 等跟药有关的词汇词义不区别，乱用。 health，healthy不分。 you，your不分 ill, illness 不分 注意身体，身体用physical来表达。 ⑵.短语错误 担心你—be care about you/be worry about you 你最好…—you would better… 服药—eat/drink medicine 适用于治疗…— adapt to/adot to For example, such as 不区分 半小时— a half of hour 句子错误 ①系动词后跟谓语动词。例如： I am very worry about you. I am very want to visit you. ②句子无谓语动词或系动词。例如： It named/called Compound Aluminum Tablets ③由于不会表达而信息点缺失。 很多学生没有写到“不思饮食”、“胃痛发作时服用”这两个信息点。 ④汉语式的英语。例如： You can eat it when you feel bloating, stomachache. Something you must take care of is that don’t eat oily food when you have the medicine. The most important is that keep the medicine far away from the children. Two things you must pay attention, don’t eat oily food, cold food. Don’t place it on someplace that children are easy to reach. I wish next time I see you, you could be healthy. You will recover your health During you eat the medicine,… ⑤祈使句句首用动词ing形式而该用动词ing做主语的时候却用动词原形。例如： Keeping it beyond chilren’s reach. Drink water is also beneficial to you. ⑥定义从句或状语从句掌握不好。例如： You should put the medicine where children can’ reach. You must keep medicine that children can’t touch it. Please take it on the place that children can’t get it. Please put it on the place where children can’t reach. Don’t worry. It doesn’t matter.I believe you will recover soon after taking the medicine. As can been seen from the medicine directions, it is named Compound Aluminum Hydroxide Tablets. It’s mainly used to cure the stomach discomfort such as bloating ,stomachaohe, hating food. Adults should take the medicine three times per day and three pills every time. You should