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模板一：对立观点作文　　第一段：陈述现状段 　　(文章的第1、2句;主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、趋势;没有固定的标准选哪种，选择一种容易下手的去写，) 　　文章第一句话： 　　1)第一句的第一种写法：就某事，人们又热烈讨论 　　There is a heated discussion whether(通常用在选择性话题：是否年级小出国，是否有必要参加…) 　　they should live off campus or live together with other roommates.(住在校外，还是和同学共住) 　　students should be asked to grade their teacher (是否学生应该要求给老师打分) 　　students should take a part-time job in school (是否学生在校期间应该找兼职) 　　2)第一句的第二种写法：某事引发人们关注 (不用写事情的经过，用一个词儿代替事情过程) 　　Recently，the problem of “”has aroused wide concern among the public 　　Currently，the phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public(酒后驾驶) 　　Currently，the frequent job-hopping of graduates has aroused wide concern among the public.(跳槽) 　　Currently，the problem of “food safety” has aroused wide concern among the public. (食品安全) 　　3)第一句的第三种写法：社会现象变成某个“词”(这种写法最大的魅力也是，将事件过程压缩成一个词!) 　　The newly-coined word/phrase“”may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age. 　　(“”中填进的词有：nude picture scandal艳照门丑闻; water shortage缺水; 　　online education网络教育;fake diplomas假证书;craze for talent shows 选秀狂热 ) 　　4)第一句的第四种写法：社会趋势 (一般都写在“有越来越多的人干什么去了”这样的社会现状) 　　There is a growing tendency nowadays that… 　　graduates in mounting numbers can hardly find an ideal job (就业难) 　　people in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for volunteer works/ various talent shows(选秀热) 　　students in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for students leaders selection (竞选班干部热) 　　people in mounting numbers participate in the test for national civil servants. (公务员热) 　　undergraduates in growing numbers take the postgraduate entrance examination (考研热) 　　people in mounting numbers try their luck to buy lottery tickets (买彩票热) 　　people in mounting numbers use credit card. (信用卡热) 　　注：people in mounting numbers 都表示“越来越多的人”，切忌写：more and more people，找死! 　　5)第一句的第五种写法：某个现象人尽皆知 (一般写比较大的，比较严重的社会问题) 　　No one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon that… 　　that goods in mounting numbers are wrapped in flaring boxes or bags (过度包装问题) 　　that there has been a st