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;情景作文写作要求;情景作文评分原则;假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华为响应绿化祖国的号召, 你班四月十二日去郊区植树。请根据一下四幅图的先后顺序, 介绍指数活动的全过程, 给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。 注意: 字数不少于60。 提示词: 郊区 suburbs ;审题;图1内容要点及细节;图2内容要点及细节;图3内容要点及细节;图4内容要点及细节;顺序;第一幅图：;第一幅图;第一幅图;第一幅图;第一幅图;图2内容要点及细节;顺序;第二幅图;第二幅图;图3内容要点及细节;顺序;第三幅图;第三幅图;第三幅图;图4内容要点及细节;顺序;第四幅图;第四幅图;感想;感想;四.发现的问题;注意的问题;情景作文各档范文; In order to do some deeds to improve our environment, our class organized an activity to plant trees in suburbs. Early in the morning,April 12th, I together with my fellowmates rode to the suburbs. The sun shone upon us and the wind blew swiftly above the growing trees. Finally we arrived at our destination. Soon after that, some of us dug holes on the ground and it was some of us’s duty to carry the little trees and place the roots of them in the holes and cover them with earth. Girls made contributions to watering the little trees. After couples of hours’shard work, littletrees were all planted. We also put a board into the ground. On the board we wrote a notice said, “Please protect trees”, which was also our purpose of this journey. At the end of our action, photos of us were taken in order to let this meaningful action remain in our minds forever. Regardless of tiredness and tougj work, we went home with satisfaction.WE all knew a small flower may mean a lot and if everyone made a contribution to protecting the environment, our planet would became much more beautiful.; I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior 3 Class One of Hong Xing Middle School. In order to beatutify our environment, we held a meaningful event---planting trees in suburbs. On April 12nd, our class happily set out together to approach the forest.The sun was shining brightly and the flowers along the road were beautiful which made everyone smile sweetly. After the arrival, boys got down to planting quickly while girls helping water the trees. Despite our tiredness, we worked happily.Thanks to the great efforts, we finished the plan on time and made a b