2011浙江省英语高考作文高2学生写后讲评.pptVIP

;利弊说明段 ;Thinking ;第一段 第二段 第三段 ;There is no doubt that everyone is eager to study in a tidy and civilized school. What has annoyed me recently is that some students scribble and litter here and there. The situation becomes increasingly serious and cannot be ignored. At present, I’m conscious of some bad behaviour in our school.;6. There is a growing tendency that some students like to scribble and litter at will, which is bound to harm our surroundings. 8. It would make sense to make rules to ban students from littering and scribbling. 9. It is high time that we recognized the significance of keeping our school neat and clean. 10. Only when we arouse the awareness can we study and live in harmony and contribute to a better campus.;June 8, 2011 Dear Mr. Headmaster, I’m LiYue, a student from Class 1, SeniorⅡ. (目的）I’m writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling. （批评） It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. （建议）I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. ;At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Yue;;;;;;;;;;;;;;-