高中英语必修一教学课件：Module4Writing（外研版）.pptVIP

Module 4;如何写社区调查报告;目前状况：生活区：有30座高楼，1000户人家，人口数量约有4000；服务区：有医院，邮局，银行；休闲区(社区公园)：有花草树木，绿化占总空间的40%，环境优美。 存在的问题：文体活动少；居民环保意识不强。;建议：…… 要求：1. 语言流畅，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 参考词汇：和谐相处 live in harmony with；居民resident。Z,xxk ;【写作指导】 ●审题定调：本文体裁属于调查报告。 ●布局谋篇：第一段：点明调查对象——祥和社区；第二段：社区状况和存在的问题；第三段：希望和建议。 注意事项：调查报告通常用第一人称来写，语言要求简洁明快、客观公正，使读者容易接受。主要使用一般现在时态和一般将来时态。;●常用表达: 1. 描写地理位置：be located in, lie in the south of ..., cover an area of ... square kilometers, be surrounded by ... 2. 描写社区状况：there be ..., including ..., be divided into ..., be made up of, be shaped like ..., take on a new look ...;3. 描写问题和建议：become more and more serious, influencing ..., taking everything into consideration, we should do ..., take some effective measures to do ..., consider it important to do ..., think it one’s duty to do ..., pay attention to, only in this way can we do ... ;【范文欣赏】 A report of our neighborhood This summer our class made a survey about Xianghe Community located near our school. The result is as follows; Xianghe Community is made up of three parts: living section with 30 high buildings, 1,000 households and about 4,000 people; service section including a post office, a hospital and a bank; and Community Park with flowers and trees, taking up 40% of the community area. But there is no bookstore or activity centre there. What’s more, we can see some rubbish here and there.; Considering everything, we think some cultural and sports activities should be provided and the environment should be protected. Only in this way can the residents here live a happy life.