2009高初中考试英语写作高分方法指教.pptVIP

English Writing; 中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。 提示：1、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他； 2、危害:自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资 源； 3、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。 要求：1、词数150左右；演讲的开头和结尾 已写好,不记入总词数。 2、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇 通顺连贯的短文。 ;How can we organize the passage?;;;;; Some students leave tap water running after washing. Some students have the lights on in the daytime. Some students order too much food and leave a lot of leftovers on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money and spend too much on snacks or drinks. ;书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求;第三档（11-15分） 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏， 没有写自己的认识 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。;; Some students leave tap water running after washing. Some students have the lights on in the daytime. Some students order too much food and leave much leftovers on the table. Some ask their parents for a lot of pocket money and spend too much on snacks or drinks. ;在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上, 尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高 级的词汇;; The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The world’s limited natural resources will be used up.;在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上, 尽量使用较复杂的语法结构和较高 级的词汇; 恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章 结构紧凑;; In my opinion, we should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students to form the good habit. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste to save everything. ;As far as I am concerned, I think only when all of us are fully aware of its seriousness can the situation be improved. On the one hand, it is necessary for schools to educate every student not to waste anything in any form and on the other hand every one of us should start with ourselves to fight against waste. It is not until all of us are involved in the activity that we can bring the situation under control.;在表达准确、保持连贯的基础上, 尽量使用较复