张瑛初中考作文评析和教学建议.pptVIP

2012年 常州中考英语写作评析及教学建议 常州外国语学校 张瑛;;;;;;;本次写作满分15分，市平均得分10分左右。 失分原因主要集中在以下几点： 时态错误。 2. 遗漏信息。 3. 词汇语法错误。 4. 缺少分段。 5. 句式单一，结构疏散。 ;;（1）提高词汇运用的基本能力 提高词汇运用的基本能力重点注重词语的词义、词性、相似词语辨析和固定搭配等，同时应抓好学、练、用三个环节。 学生在写作过程中与词语相关的错误主要体现在选词和用词两个方面。如： The price of oil has raised so quickly that some people find it hard to afford it. （选词错误，应为risen） As teenagers, we shouldn’t do something to against the laws of our country. （词性） The government provides good living and learning environment to teenagers. (固定搭配);如：traffic, transport 及vehicle这三个词作为名词时均与汉语中“交通”相关，对这三个词的误用、乱用是常见错误之一。针对这三个词的教学活动可设计如下： Step1 词语解释 traffic: n (u) vehicles moving along the road or street; number of people or goods moved from one place to another by sea ,road or air. transport : n (u) transporting or being transported vehicle: n (c) A vehicle is a machine such as a car, bus, or truck which has an engine and is used to carry people from place to place Step 2 操练巩固： 根据所提供的词选择正确的搭配。 much ___________ air ___________ public ___________ heavy ____________ various ___________ choose a proper ___________ ____________ system Police control the _________ during the rush hour.;;用扩句的形式提高学生单句写作能力 试题：假如你是一名中学生，请以My colorful school life为题，写一篇短文。要求100个字左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总数。 要点提示： 1：上课认真听讲 ?????????? 2：课后完成作业 ?????????? 3：经常参加体育锻炼 ?????????? 4：去图书馆阅读 I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard. ? ??????? _______________________________________________________________________________ ??????? May there always be colorful life around my school.; 学生的习作 I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard. ??I listen to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library. ??? May there always be colorful life arou