学校一日生活[05北京]讲评.pptVIP

WRITING ; 美国中学生Jeff将要来你所在的红星中学体验生活、学习中文。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他在学校一天的安排。 注意: 1.信的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少60。;Key points;Evaluation ;If you want to write a good passage, you should ; I have prepared a room for you in my house. Our school is quite close to my house, so we can go to school together by bike. The first class begins at 9 o’clock. We will learn Chinese until 11:30. I can help you when you have difficulty. At noon we will have lunch in the dining-room. There are many kinds of Chinese food. I’m sure you will love it. What’s more, you can make more friends and talk with them while you are enjoying your lunch. ; In the afternoon, we can have fun with our classmates in the playground. If you like, we can play basketball, football or table-tennis. Also, there is a swimming pool in our school. We can go swimming as well. If you have any questions, please let me know. I will try my best to make yourself at home.; I have prepared a room for you in my house. Our school is quite close to my house, so we can go to school together by bike. The first class begins at 9 o’clock. We will learn Chinese until 11:30. I can help you when you have difficulty. At noon we will have lunch in the dining-room. There are many kinds of Chinese food. I’m sure you will love it. What’s more, you can make more friends and talk with them while you are enjoying your lunch. ; In the afternoon, we can have fun with our classmates in the playground. If you like, we can play basketball, football or table-tennis. Also, there is a swimming pool in our school. We can go swimming as well. If you have any questions, please let me know. I will try my best to make yourself at home.;WRITING ;时间顺序及其表达 ;You will go to school by bike with me in the morning. We will learn Chinese together from 9 to 11:30 a.m.. We will have lunch in the dining room. You can make more friends while you are enjoying tasty Chinese food. You can do a variety of sports in the playground. I’m sure you