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Teaching design Writing 东北育才学校 方朝阳 ;;;;;;;;“Reading makes a full man, conference a ready man, and writing an exact man.” ——Francis Bacon ;Controlled writing;1.只有单词，没有句子，不知所云。给0-5分 2.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读，给6-12分 3. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给12-19分； 4.内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误， 书写规范，给20-25分；; Purpose;;Writing;Pre-writing：; Writing： ; Rewriting： ;实 战 训 练;; ②She loves her students. She cares about us. ③Her lessons are interesting and lively. ④ Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching ! ; Rewriting ; Step Ⅳ Writing Strategies and Techniques; 简洁性 conciseness;Conciseness;;简洁性练习;Coherence;过渡词的使用: 1.表联合或选择关系： 2.表转折关系： 3.表因果关系： 4.表顺序： 5.表解释说明： 6.表递进关系： 7.表总结： 8.强调: 　;连贯性练习;Tidiness;;;Diversity;1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. ;1). She likes sports very much.;Step V Writing practice; My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. ①She is very fashionable.②She loves her students. She cares about us. ③Her lessons are interesting and lively; ④ Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching !; Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. ①She is very fashionable.②She loves her students. She cares about us. ;③Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; ④ Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. ; We all love her and her teaching !;请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数80词左右。内容要点如下： 1． 谭??师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后， 2． 在四川德阳一所中学