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阅卷老师的评分标准 切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖 用词不重复 句式变化多 　 杜绝中国式的英文 文章当中的闪光点 卷面的整洁，正确的修改形式 阅卷老师的评分标准 一、切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖。 What would happen if there were no power? It pays to be honest A letter in reply to a friend Schedule for the day 二、句式变化多 ( Expressions ) 句子的多样性（简单句，复合句，及省略句、倒装句 )例: 在简单句当中运用几种结构 : 主语+谓语+ 宾语 主语+谓语+ 双宾语（直接宾语，间接宾语） 主语+谓语+ 宾补 注意运用There be 的句型 One car come, one car go, two car bang bang, one car die . 尽量多用一些被动语态，多用名词做主语，用被动代替主动, 丰富文章当中的句式变化。 例： He is very interested in pop music. He shows great interests in pop music. Pop music is what he is interested in. Great interests has been shown by him in pop music. 六 大 从 句 的 运 用: 宾语从句 定语从句 状语从句 主语从句 表语从句 同位语从句 As far as I am concerned I agree with the point that------- It goes without saying that ------------- As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that------------ 三、用词不重复 必须要注意写作的具体元素及，用词切记多余重复(redundancy) 一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不同的词来表达。 尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的用法: for example/ for instance/as an illustration./A case in point is that good /wonderful/ great /fantastic /surprising nice /incredible/ fabulous / incredible interviewee/job applicant / job hunter /job seeker /the people who are going to find a job. 用句子和词组来代替一个词 in the first place, in the second place There are many people who hold/argue/maintain that---- It goes without saying that ------------- As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that------------ 四、文章当中的闪光点 在四级考试作文题目当中适当地运用谚语可以起到画龙点睛的作用，增加文章当中的闪光点。但是谚语引用在文章中最多不能超过三次，引用的谚语也不能太偏。 Each coin has two sides. A good beginning is half done . Where there is a will there is a way . “ God helps those that help themselves” A little learning is a very dangerous thing. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 五、 杜绝中国式的英文 As a proverb says: “America and China not enough .” I saw a breadcar kiss a walkman in the man-line. Left see see, right see see. The