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英语46级图表作文
阅卷老师的评分标准
切题,把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖
用词不重复
句式变化多
杜绝中国式的英文
文章当中的闪光点
卷面的整洁,正确的修改形式
阅卷老师的评分标准
一、切题,把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖。
What would happen if there were no power?
It pays to be honest
A letter in reply to a friend
Schedule for the day
二、句式变化多 ( Expressions )
句子的多样性(简单句,复合句,及省略句、倒装句 )例: 在简单句当中运用几种结构 :
主语+谓语+ 宾语
主语+谓语+ 双宾语(直接宾语,间接宾语)
主语+谓语+ 宾补
注意运用There be 的句型
One car come, one car go, two car bang bang, one car die .
尽量多用一些被动语态,多用名词做主语,用被动代替主动, 丰富文章当中的句式变化。
例: He is very interested in pop music.
He shows great interests in pop music.
Pop music is what he is interested in.
Great interests has been shown by him in pop music.
六 大 从 句 的 运 用:
宾语从句
定语从句
状语从句
主语从句
表语从句
同位语从句
As far as I am concerned I agree with the point that-------
It goes without saying that -------------
As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that------------
三、用词不重复
必须要注意写作的具体元素及,用词切记多余重复(redundancy) 一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不同的词来表达。
尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的用法:
for example/ for instance/as an illustration./A case in point is that
good /wonderful/ great /fantastic /surprising nice /incredible/ fabulous / incredible
interviewee/job applicant / job hunter /job seeker /the people who are going to find a job.
用句子和词组来代替一个词
in the first place, in the second place
There are many people who hold/argue/maintain that----
It goes without saying that -------------
As far as I know I am in favor of the opinion that------------
四、文章当中的闪光点
在四级考试作文题目当中适当地运用谚语可以起到画龙点睛的作用,增加文章当中的闪光点。但是谚语引用在文章中最多不能超过三次,引用的谚语也不能太偏。
Each coin has two sides.
A good beginning is half done .
Where there is a will there is a way .
“ God helps those that help themselves”
A little learning is a very dangerous thing.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
五、 杜绝中国式的英文
As a proverb says: “America and China not enough .”
I saw a breadcar kiss a walkman in the man-line.
Left see see, right see see. The
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