高考阅卷感想和英语写作标准解读.pptVIP

高考阅卷感想和高考英语写作标准解读;2016年山东高考英语阅卷感想 ;;写作要点;主要扣分点;反思教学;(4)四大基本原则： 具体性原则 good---kind-hearted, easy-going 新颖性原则 difficult--challenging 短语优先原则:use---make use of 避免词汇重复原则----like--enjoy, build--set up ;(5)适当运用高级词汇：如many--- a great number of ,rich--abundant (6) 变化句式结构，增加得分亮点： 肯定不如双否好； 陈述不如倒装妙； 主动不如被动巧； 简单不如并列、复合强； 非谓语结构不能少； 简单句变身有妙招； 篇章结构巧连贯。 (7)“起”好开头、“承”好上下、“转”好过渡、“合”好结尾。 ? ;参考范文 粉红色表示布局谋篇，深红色字表示文章提示的要点。 Dear Ms Jenkins,（称呼，不能少） I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term(自我介绍). ? ? I’m writing to ask for your help (解释缘由). ? ? ?I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just finished my application letter and resume(详细阐述写信理由和事件经过). ? ?However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used（交代自己的困难）. I know you have a busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes（重申写信目的）. ? Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment (提示所附材料). Thank you for your kindness!(表示感谢，必须写出) Yours, Li Hua（结尾，格式不能错） ;范文： Dear Ms Jenkins,?? I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me. Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful. Yours,