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PAGE  PAGE 5 第三部分　写 作 专题二十　书面表达 第一讲　提纲式书面表达(文字信息类) 角度1 记叙文 Passage 1(2013·福建) 孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求： 1．描述漫画内容； 2．分析漫画揭示的问题； 3．提出你的看法。 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3．词数120左右。 参考词汇：铺路pave the way From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. 【思路点拨】 漫画反映了当今家庭“以孩子为中心，父母是臣仆”这一社会现象，发人深省。文章应分为三段，一是描述图画内容，二是揭示本质，三是提出自己的看法并提出合理建议。 【范文赏读】 From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.The son，well dressed，waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet，sweating. It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering the hope of their parents.Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. Such a situation is of great concern.In my opinion，overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for childrens development.Instead of doing everything for them，parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves.Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. 【亮点揭示】 本文覆盖全部写作要点，语言规范，论证有力，是难得的佳作。写作亮点：一是段落清晰，首段描述漫画内容，第二段深入分析其社会、家庭原因，第三段提出针对性很强的建议。二是高级词汇和短语俯拾皆是，如proudly，sweating，nowadays，shouldering，independent，overprotection，extremely，reliant on，spare no effort以及of great concern等。三是复杂句式应用得当，如第一段中的sweating和第二段中的shouldering the hope的非谓语作伴随状语，so reliant on their parents that...引导结果状语从句，Only in this way...构成的倒装句式等。四是衔接自然：第一段while表示前后对比，第二段的as a consequence，第三段的in my opinion，instead of都为本文增色不少。 Passage 2(2013·江苏) 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Word