高中考试写作专题讲解3.pptVIP

;范例引路：;某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂，现征求师生的意见，师生赞成、反对比例如图。请你以该校学生名义，以“There are other things to consider besides money” 为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，陈述反对在此建厂的理由。 反对的理由： 1、严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。 2、造成严重的空气污染。 3、侵占学生游戏玩乐的场所。 同意的理由： 1、可以为本市赚钱 。 2、提供就业机会 ; It is reported that a new chemical works will be built here. Certainly, it is a good idea for developing economy. But on the other hand, it also causes a big problem. Firstly, many people don’t agree to build this works. It will pollute the drinking water though they have promised to do something to prevent pollution. Secondly, the smoke and the soot will bring lots of illness, which is dangerous for every one. Thirdly, the chemical works will be built where we students play games and have sports after school. If built, we will have no place for fun. Because of the above reasons, we hope that the chemical works won’t be built near our school. ;; 五个基本环节 Five basic steps to discuss something serious 一、开头 Starting 二、提出观点 Giving ideas 三、强化论点 Developing 四、提出反驳 Arguing 五、得出结论 Coming to a conclusion;一、开头（Starting） 1、陈述事实式 Once again university graduates start a new round of job hunting. Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. 2、设问式 Right is right. Right? But is left wrong? (Is Left Wrong?) ;二、提出观点（Giving ideas） 1、借助常识： It is known to all that smoking is harmful to our health. 2、直抒己见： I think it is useful to build a new dam across the river. We believe that doing exercises every day will do us a lot of good. 3、巧用成语： “Where there is a will, there is a way.” It is the same in learning English. ;三、强化论点（Developing） 1、First…,Second…,Third…Finally… 2、Firstly…,Secondly…,Thirdly…Finally… 3、First of all…,Then…,Next…,At last… 4、Furthermore…;Besides…;Moreover… 5、What’s more,…;At the same time,…; What is worse,… ;四、提出反驳（Arguing） 1、but, yet, still; however; although… 2、on the other hand…; on the contrary…; in spite of…; even though…; At the same time… 3、60 percent