2014上海杨浦区高考二模英语翻译具体解析第1_4句.docVIP

翻译1 ：（4分） 原句： 不管你相信不相信，善于倾听并采纳别人的意见是明智的。 一. 评分标准： 1分 1分 1分 Believe it or not / Whether you believe it or not, it is advisable to 1分 listen to (others) (readily / willingly) / be a good listener 1分 and take/adopt/accept/follow their/ others’ advice/ suggestion(s) /idea(s) /opinions /viewpoint(s). 或可以： Believe it or not, being ready/willing to listen to others and adopt their advice is advisable. 或可以： Whether you believe it or not, listening to (others) and adopting their opinion(s) (readily / willingly) are /is advisable. 注意：“采纳”用receive , “善于”用be good at 都扣 0.5分, 原句“善于”意为“乐于”， 漏掉it 扣0.5分 二. 典型错误： 1. 不理解advisable 的意思，把它误认为“倾听”，而把句子中的“明智的”用“sensible, wise”表示。 2. “不管你相信不相信”：翻译成： No matter whether you believe it or not, 或 Whatever you believe it or not, 3. 句型不熟练, 很多同学漏掉 it Whether you believe or not, / Believe or not 4. 中文“善于”使很多同学句子出现偏差，原本正确的句子又改错。 本题的得分率2.6分左右。 2. 能否坚持自己所做的事情是一个人取得成功的重要因素之一。（persevere） Whether one can persevere in what he is doing is one of the important factors of his success. Whether one can persevere in---------------1’ Whether to persevere in 也对 Whether 用if扣半分 介词in 漏掉或用错都扣半分 用it 做形式主语扣半分 多一个连词that 扣一分 语序错扣一分 what he is doing------------------------------1’ what he does something he is doing /does the thing that he is doing/ does 都算对 whatever he is doing/ does 除以上两种时态外，has been doing 也算对。其他时态都扣一分 the things what he is doing或what he do 都扣一分 one of the important factors-----------------1’ among the important factors/elements one/an important factor/element 都算对 factor 用错或该用复数而不用都扣半分 important 写成main, major 也扣半分 of his success----------------------------------1’ to （his）success leading to/contributing to success that lead to success of (his) achieving success 都算对 of his achievements of being successful for him to achieve success/succeed to achieve success /to be successful/ to succeed/ that makes him achieve success/ to