英文写作-单吹氖段落.ppt

生物医学论著的英文写作 吴希美 浙江大学医学院药理学系;参考书：魏尔清 主编，生物医学论著的英 文写作（第二版）. 科学出版社 2006年;生物医学论著类别：;1、大篇幅或者带有综述性的论著;1、Letter, Communication 2、Article 3、Review ;初学者写好论著的秘诀;生物医学论著组成：;写作顺序：;—单词、句子和段落;一、单词选择;一、单词选择;一、单词选择;一、单词选择;二、句子结构;（1）主语、动词、补足语之间不能表达核心内容 主语： The children with ateriovenous shunts had the shunts opened, heparin injected, and the aterial and venous sides of the shunt clamped. In the children who has ateriovenous shunts, the shunts were opened, heparin was injected, and the aterial and venous sides of the shunts were clamped. The patient showed no change in symptoms. The patient’s symptoms did not change.;（1）主语、动词、补足语之间不能表达核心内容 动词： An increase in the heart rate occurred. The heart rate (was) increased. The new drug caused a decrease in heart rate The new drug decreased the heart rate With bilateral leg vessel congestion, the complication of forearm vessels increased significantly when the vessles of both leg were congested, the complication of forearm vessels increased significantly The results demonstrated the essential role of the D1 receptor in the locomotor stimulant effects of cocaine. The results demonstrated that the D1 receptor is essential for the locomotor stimulant effects of cocaine.; (2)名词堆砌 Filament length variability Variability of filament length Air spaces phospholipid pool Phospholipid pool in the air spaces (3)简化名词 There was no significant difference between resting lactates and exercising lactates. There was no significant difference between lactate concentratios in resting subjects and in exercising subjects. ;(4)句子内容过于丰富、冗长 避免事件的缠结 避免一次同时表达多个事件;(6)没有用并列句表达意义上的平行内容 对比 Cardic output decreased by 10% but blood pressure was unchanged 相似 We hope to increase the complete response and to improve survival. 选择 In dog about 20% of plasma glucose carbon is recycled via tricarbon compounds either in cold or at neutral ambient temperature. 比较 Pulmonary blood flow was greater than renal blood flow.;(7)比较配对中的问题 Than