【2017年整理】海淀一模英语作文例文及详解.ppt

假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了上周五你参加的一次拓展训练活动。请根据图片的先后顺序，用英语为校刊写一篇短文。词数不少于60。 参考词汇：Outward Bound 拓展训练 ;;;;;情景作文典型错误; ;; Time passed quickly and before we knew it ,it was time for us to say goodbye to the Outward Bound Base. We were tired but happy. The memorable activities which teach us the importance of friendship, courage and cooperation will be kept in our minds forever. ;;;附件;常见错误; In the picture, a man on a boat is searching for some fish in the distance with a telescope. However, his efforts do not pay off, for the net is still empty. Amusingly, a school of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely ignores them. What the picture conveys is that we should never aim too high, neglecting the readily attainable goal. If the man stopped focusing on the distant waters and looked around, the fish near the boat would be an easy harvest for him. In our daily life, we often make the same mistake. Without realizing the simple truth that some precious chances around us might slip away ,we tend to believe that the higher our goal is, the bigger success we will achieve. Actually, our work will be more fruitful if we are more practical. ; In the picture, a man on a boat is searching for some fish with a telescope. However, his efforts do not pay off, for the net is still empty. Amusingly, a group of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely ignores them. What the picture conveys is that we should never aim too high, neglecting the readily attainable goal. If the man stopped focusing on the distant waters and looked around, the fish near the boat would be an easy harvest for him. This is not uncommon in our daily life. When we aim to build one ridiculously large project but neglect the seemingly small task at hand , we may end up completing nothing. However，if we aim for one small goal after another, we may complete a large project in the end without great difficulty. As far as I am