2013外研版必修2Module 2“No Drugs”课件Ⅳ.pptVIP

3．所有的吸烟者都应该尽最大努力戒烟，而那些不吸烟者应该远离烟草。 All the smokers should _____________________stop smoking and those who haven’t smoked should________________. 答案： try their best to；keep away from cigarettes 连句成篇 ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 佳作欣赏 No Smoking ①As is known to us all, smoking is harmful to health，but at present there are still a lot of people smoking cigarettes，among whom the number of women and students is increasing. Smoking can do great harm and many smokers suffer many terrible illnesses such as heart disease and lung cancer.②What’s worse，millions of smokers die from smoking every year in the world and ③ meanwhile，smoking can cause air pollution and does harm to others. Smoking is not good for health at all.④Therefore，for the health of smokers themselves and also the people around them，all the smokers should try their best to stop smoking and those⑤who haven’t smoked should keep away from cigarettes. 类文点津 说明文 说明文是一种常见文体，是以向读者揭示某种事物或说明某种道理，向读者提供知识和指导为目的的。说明文分事物说明文、事理说明文和程序说明文。事物说明文主要介绍事物是什么样的。事理说明文主要用来介绍科学知识。程序说明文主要用于介绍和说明某事物怎样操作和怎样使用。 说明文的结构顺序一般有三种。 1．时间顺序 就是按照事物发展的先后次序来说明事物。一般来说，介绍路线、制作事物的先后过程等，都可以采用这种顺序来说明。 2．空间顺序 就是按照事物的空间存在形式，或从外到内、或从上到下、或从前到后、或从整体到部分等依次介绍。一般来说，说明事物的形状、构造的文章，通常采用空间顺序。 3．逻辑顺序 就是按照事物的内在逻辑关系来安排结构顺序。 本文亮点： 亮点一：本文用说明文的形式阐述了目前的烟民状况，吸烟的危害以及戒烟的号召，呼吁广大烟民以及不吸烟的人为了健康而远离烟草。 亮点二：本文中使用了①as和⑤who引导的定语从句，提升了本文的质量。 亮点三：文中恰当运用了②What’s worse，③Meanwhile，④Therefore等连接词语，把整篇文章连接成一个整体。 ①Drugs_are dangerous to people’s health.If one often takes ②cannabis and ③cocaine，he will be ④addicted to them.He will become ill and even get ⑤cancer.If a serious ⑥addict can’t get timely ⑦treatment，he ⑧is_likely_to die.Drugs are also dangerous to the society.If a man becomes too addicted to drugs，he will have to