基础写作的写作技巧〔如何写出复杂性的句子〕.ppt

Basic writing基础写作 * * * * How to write a story about a person? 本节课重点难点 重点：短句变成长句，尤其是复合句和并列句的使用。 难点：五个句子之间的自然过渡和衔接词的选用是写作难点。 Make the sentence longer. The longer, the better. Our maths teacher is a woman. Our maths teacher Our maths teacher is a ________________ woman. Our maths teacher is a___________woman, who ______________________________________ ______________________, our maths teacher is a _________________ woman, who _____________________________________. 某中学生英语报社举办中学生“2005感动中国”观后感征文。你被2005感动中国人物洪战辉的事迹深深感动。根据下面提示写一篇征文，投给这家报社。 洪战辉事迹简介： 1、1982年出生于河南农村； 2、1994年父亲得了精神病并在当年捡来了一个刚出生的女弃婴； 3、1995年，母亲不堪重负离家出走。 4. 他边学习边照顾捡来的妹妹和生病的父亲，担负着常人难以想象的重担考上大学，并一直带着妹妹上大学，照看她…… 写作要求：只能用5个句子（不包括已给出的部分）表达全部的内容。 参考词汇：2005感动中国 Touch China 2005 Group 1 1. Recently, I watched Touch China 2005 on TV. 2. I was deeply moved by the story of Hong Zhanhui. 3. He was born in Henan Province in 1982. Sentence1:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Recently, I watched Touch China 2005 on TV and was deeply moved by the story of Hong Zhanhui who was born in Henan Province in 1982. Group 2 1. He was 12. 2. His father got mental disease. 3. One day he brought home an abandoned newly-born girl. Sentence2:____________________________________________________________ Group 3 1.His mother suffered from the heavy burden. 2.A year later, his mother deserted the family 3.Hong began to shoulder the responsibility for taking care of his little sister and sick father. Sentence3:__________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ A year later，his mother, suffering from the heavy burden, deserted the family and Hong began to shoulder the responsibility for taking care of his little sister and sick father. Group 4 1.Hong loved school and studied hard, 2.He was fin