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GMAT写作题库范文（二十七） 　写作是个厚积薄发的考试，同学们在备考GMAT写作时，不仅要多练习，也要去掌握一些重点语句。有些题库范文是需要大家掌握并且熟练记忆的，熟记于心才能运用自如，才能举一反三。接下来小编就给大家介绍一下GMAT写作范文，希望对大家备考 HYPERLINK /aw/ \o GMAT写作考试 GMAT写作考试有帮助。 　　27. The following appeared in a newspaper editorial. 　　“As violence in movies increases, so do crime rates in our cities. To combat this problem we must establish a board to censor certain movies, or we must limit admission to persons over 21 years of age. Apparently our legislators are not concerned about this issue since a bill calling for such actions recently failed to receive a majority vote.” 　　Discuss how well reasoned... etc. 　　报纸社论： 　　由于电影中的暴力增加，我们的城市中的犯罪也增加了。为了和这个问题斗争，我们必须建立委员会来审查特定的电影，或者我们必须限制对21岁以上的人的入场资格。很明显我们的立法机构并不关心这件事，因为最近的一个要求采取这种行动的法案没有获得多数。 　　Based upon a correlation between increases in movie violence and crime rates in cities, the author argues that to combat crime in cities we must either censor movies that contain violence or prohibit people who are under 21 years of age from viewing them. The author further argues that because legislators failed to pass a bill calling for these alternatives, they are not concerned with the problem of crime in our cities. The author’s reasoning is unconvincing, since it suffers from two critical problems. 　　To begin with, the author’s solution to the problem rests on the claim that portrayals of violence in movies are the cause of crime in the cities. However, the evidence offered is insufficient to support this claim. A mere positive correlation between movie violence and city crime rates does not necessarily prove a causal relationship. In addition, all other prospective causes of city crime such as poverty or unemployment must be ruled out. As it stands, the author’s solution to the problem is based upon an oversimplified analysis of the issue. 　　Another problem with the argument is that the author’s solution assumes that only persons under 21 years of age are adversely affected by movie violence. Ultima