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* * 2010年开放作文 阅卷体会 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. 首先， 在教学中应该规范学生的书写。 连体字注意i，f，t，c，r，v 如credit ——credot 1分 其次， 不交白卷不等于胡编乱造。 “文章要围绕中心论点展开（与讨论内容之间的关系合情合理）” 如：I can see from the picter. A big tree, two house, and the Sun. 1分 In the picture, we can see two build in it. There it a high tree grow up between in the two buid. The sky have a big sun. In my opinion, at the hard government also have grow up. We must hard work and study, we can grow up like tree. We should learn the high tree, don’t afraid the bad government. 2分 In the picture I can see two building, lift one is higher than Right one. in the middle have a tree. the tree is highest, the sun on the Right. It make me remember my childhood. I am bed kids. I like play games, so I always want go to outside, when I go to school. I feel so boring. So I didn’t go to school when I want to play games, but I have a perfect and out stand teacher. She always wait me on our school door state, she tell me she so worried me. So I loved her, she give a warm heart, when I get wrong, she will tell me the trues. When have a terrible. Shen will help me for all. I think I liked the picture’s trees. You will have terrible or little sickness, yet you could go on, growing a particular trees, the sun like our teachers or our parents. Believe in you-self. 2分 第三，写作套路谨慎使用。 2010年高考阅卷评分标准： 1.围绕中心论点展开（与讨论内容的关 系） 2.逻辑是否清晰，看整体通篇逻辑 3.内容是否充实，说出图画中的主要元素，但不必包括所有图中的内容，依据立意而定。 4.看上下文的逻辑关系，以内容逻辑为首要依据。 如何得分： 1.训练读图能力 主要论点： 1.在逆境中成长 2.父母应给孩子更多的 发展空间 3.城市发展与环境保护 4.改变不了环境，改变自己 如何得分： 2.训练语言表达能力 第四档：看不出描图与解图的关系 0分：乱抄，写的内容与图片无关 4分：描述与阐述间有联系 5分：描述与阐述间有更多联系。 Look at the picture, we can see the sun, a tree and two buildings. And the buildings is different of we can see in oue live. The tree is between thr teo trees. It can not grow up stick. But it grow up yet and it can meet t