雅思写作6分范文及考官评语.pdf

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 雅思写作6分范文及考官评语 雅思写作范文的参考对大家准备自己的雅思写作与很大的帮助，所 以在备考的过程中多准备一些雅思写作范文还是很有必要的。下面为大 家搜集了一批雅思写作6分范文，后面附有考官的评语，供大家参考。 The animal experimentation is very difficult issue with a lot of people feeling very strongly of it, we are use the animals for the experimentation in different way, one of most big problem is for test the cosmetics, the images of animals with things put in their eyes for so we are able to look a bit better make many people very angry. Is it necessary? The companies such as the body shop said that they do not experiment on animals and they produce good cosmetics who make money, I am not agree that making the cosmetics that make our faces better does not mean the animals must suffering in terrible ways, it does not seem moral for me. On the other hand we also use the animals for test the new drugs. Without these new drugs people die and suffer when they need not, some of the people believe that the animals should not suffer and die so that we can avoid it, I am not agree here, these people will change the minds when it is they who are die or one of their children, it is sad that the animals have to suffer for this thing but here I believe that the suffering is justify. Is there alternative to the animal experimentation? I’m not expert but I don’t think so, the monkeys are most near biology animals and without test to them, we cannot sure of affects of the new drugs, we test on humans also but only when we know the drugs not a problem to us, the testing on humans without the tests on the animals could make the tragedies. So in conclusion I do not believe that the animal testing is justify for not essential things but for essential things I believe that there is not choice and it is justify. (307 words) Estimate Estimated IELTS Writing Band 6 IELTS Examiner Commentary This essay was written by a Pakistani IELTS student studying in the UK.