新课标Book4_Unit1_Writing.ppt

2. Talk about a great woman you admire. 4. Writing Tip 5. Sayings proverbs You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 人必须相信自己，这就是成功的秘诀。 （卓别林） It is no use doing what you like; you have got to like what you do. 不能爱哪行才干哪行，要干哪行爱哪行。（英国首相丘吉尔） The important thing in life is to have a great aim, and the determination to attain it. 人生重要的事情就是确定一个伟大的目标，并决心实现它。(德国诗人、戏剧家歌德 ) III. Writing 2. Look at your first draft. 3. Peer-editing. 4. Complete your draft. * Unit 1 Women of achievement Period 6 Writing and summing up Review the two passages we have read. Think about: what we can write when introducing a person; how we shall organize an article about a person. I. Lead in 1）personal information 2）personality and quality 3）things she has done 4）evaluation from other people II. Summary 1. Possible content: 2. Possible ways to write the article: Part 1: an introduction to the person Part 2: supporting details 1) characters 2) achievements Part 3: a conclusion 1) what you think of her 2) how people view her Introduce a person 3. Description and evaluation vocabulary Summary When you are writing about somebody’s life, choose an interesting example that shows the person’s character. Is your title attractive? Have you given an introduction to your heroine in the 1st paragraph? Have you listed her achievements in the 2nd paragraph? Have you mentioned her qualities in the 2nd paragraph? Have you written one or two examples to support your idea? Do you have a conclusion in the 3rd paragraph? Has your partner expressed his/her idea clearly? Has he/she spelt all the words correctly? Is his/her grammar correct? Has he/she used punctuations correctly? Has he/she used the adjectives and phrases you learned in the unit to describe the heroine? Writing Writin