雅思作文修改示例：科技是否加大贫富差距.docxVIP

智课网IELTS备考资料 雅思作文修改示例：科技是否加大贫富差距 摘要： 今天给一个学生改了作文，发现一个多数人都会有的问题，就是“不扣题”，贴上来给大家看一下。这篇四段式的作文整体的思路是不错的，特别是中间两段的论据很好，问题在于两个  今天给一个学生改了作文，发现一个多数人都会有的问题，就是“不扣题”，贴上来给大家看一下  题目：  Task 2: some people believe the range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between poor peole and rich people.Others think it is having an opposite effect.  Discuss these points of view.What is your opinion.  A gap for the range of technology which benefits individuals among poor peole and the rich ones that has became a hot-debated issue nowadays.Someo