高二期末作文复习.pptVIP

1、对立观点式 A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？ B．有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？ C．我的看法。 百分比的表述： 1. …percent of …are for it, holding …(opinion). (In addition / Moreover / What’s more, …percent of …have no idea). However, those against it account for / make up / take up … percent of all, and they think… 本句型常用在调查表中表达不同的观点 2. … has the biggest percentage, about … percent; …is equally … percent; …takes the second(…) place, about …percent; only… percent Typical mistakes clothes ---- clothing ---- cloth Some students agree to uniforms. But some don’t agree it. They don’t like putting on/ dressing in uniforms. Wearing uniforms can avoid comparing with other students. As a student, we should … Most students are required to wear uniforms and so do my school. 对立观点式作文总结 “同学对校服的看法”片面，或只有观点，没有理由 有模板，没有内容 有内容，没有模板 Are you listening/ writing with all your attention? … have an agreement attitude to … … is of great useful/ strict. 2． 社会问题（现象）式 A．一个社会问题或者现象。 B． 产生的原因 C． 对社会和我们生活的影响 D． 如何采取恰当措施 E． 前景的预测 1. Title 2. Summary ( About 30 words) 3. A transitional( 过渡 ) sentence 4. A narrative (About the same topic) 5. An ending paragraph (Point out the topic) 审题 Attention: Off the point! 不是事例，没有记叙 说教 记叙得不好，没有逻辑，尤其没有结尾，然后suddenly I realized that … 大量对话（说教、罗嗦） Don’t make sense at all. What elements should be included in the summary? Nearly a week passed before the girl was able to explain what had happened to her. One afternoon she set out from the coast in a small boat and was caught in a storm. Towards evening，the boat struck a rock and the girl jumped into the sea. Then she swam to the shore after spending the whole night in the water. During that time she covered a distance of eight miles. Early next morning，she saw a light ahead. She knew she was near the shore because the light was high up on the cliffs. On arriving at the shore，the girl struggled up the cliff towards the light she had seen. That was all she remembered. When she woke up a day later， she found herself in hospital. When？ Where？ Who？ W