高一图画写作.pptVIP

书面表达训练 如何算是一篇好的文章？ 1、覆盖了所有的要点。 2、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（词汇、句型【高级】和语法多样化【较复杂】） 3、有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。 给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象 给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象 2.3：??抓、遣： 列要点（关键词——动词或动词词组） 4.???? 连： (1) 扩词成句。在书写时，若无把握的情况下尽量用简单的句子、单词或短语表达。 (2) 组句成文（开头结尾、增添细节、行文连贯、高级结构），并呈现常用承接、过渡词语。思路清晰，逻辑严密。 5.???? 查：复查全文 （1）体裁格式是否正确； （2）内容要点是否全面； （3）全文的行文是否通顺、连贯。 （4）句子的时态、语态是否正确； （5）主谓是否一致； （6）标点符号与大小写有无错误； （7）字数是否相符等。 一：图画作文 图画作文可分为这几种情况： （一）漫画型 （二）故事型 （三）介绍型 （四）图表型 （一）漫画型 这类作文特点是通常借助一到两幅图片或漫画，让大家描写画面内容并谈感想看法。 这类作文既可考查学生观察描写想象能力，又可考查学生运用英语分析并解决问题的能力，从而很好达到对学生英语水平的考查。 1 描述画面内容，通常可用两三句概括性的语句来描述画面的内容 2 揭示画面寓意, 反应某一社会问题。 3 按要求，结合现实生活实际，谈谈自己对此现象问题的看法，或提出解决问题的措施。 看图作文的写作 Write an English composition in over 120 words on the picture and instructions given (2002上海高考题） 1. 简要描述下列图片内容 2. 结合生活实际 谈谈自已的看法 3. 字数不少于100字 Heading: We can see in the picture, when a child is learning to ride bicycle, the parents and grandparents are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child, for fear that she should fall and hurt herself. Body: This picture reminds me of something in my daily life. Due to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole family. Both the parents and grandparents usually tend to spoil the child. Body: As far as I am concerned, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering(宠爱) has on their child. Under the parents’ protection, the children know only comfort and ease. If they don’t learn how to live independently, how can they get over the difficulties they will meet with in the future? Body: For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive society without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent. Body: In short，the path to success is filled w