高三书面表达评析及指导赛课.ppt

Chinglish horse horse tiger tiger open water Good good study day day up? up street buy things give you some colour see see heart flower angry open I call Li old big. This year 25.  应用文：书信、通知、便条 记叙文：看图作文、日记 说明文：人物介绍、活动 议论文： 注意：1. 词数150左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。 June 8, 2008  Dear Peter, Im very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. …………. 作业得分情况 Bad sample 字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。 Good sentences from your articles 1.It is/has been six years since I began to learn English.(杨敏；王荣；林柳) 2.Try as I might, I still find English is difficult to learn.(陈文) 3.I am determined to try my best to learn English well.(李翔) 4.No pains, no gains. I will spare no effort to learn English well.(李迎迎) 5.Beside the road stand many tall buildings.(李翔) 6.A large number of buildings have sprung up like the bamboo shoots after the spring rain.(邵冉) 7.People have built many buildings and widened the streets, which makes my hometown more and more beautiful.(杨敏) 8. With the development of economy, my hometown has changed a lot.(王宇) Not long ago I returned to my hometown and found great changes had taken place there. Many new houses have been built and roads have been widened. My hometown is getting modern and more and more beautiful. I hope if you have a chance to come to China , I ’ll show you around my hometown when you are on leave. Best wishes,  Li Hua  Six steps for writing (写作六步骤） 在行文的整体性上，要合理使用到一些连接词或短语结构，比如： you’d better…; I think…; I suggest that….; first/ at first/first of all…; secondly; then; as a matter of fact…; generally speaking; I wish…/I hope…etc. Thank you for your listening 10.? 对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in conclusion, generall