1 观点性作文feedback.pptVIP

最近你们班就“Is it good for junior students to surf the Internet while busy studying”　一话题进行了激烈的讨论．请你根据下表的信息，写一篇介绍，并陈述自己的观点． My General Impression: 在要点上把握不是很好,这篇文章的要求是:写一篇介绍，并陈述自己的观点。 　　因此，介绍双方的观点和原因是重点，自己的看法仅仅是另一个重点而已。 　　所以该文章的要点应该是９－１０个：Topic sentence,-- 55% of the students opinion, reason 1, 2, 3, --45% of the students opinion, reason 1,2,3,--your opinion, reason 1, 2. ２．所以在结构上，文章应该分成四段：　 Topic sentence: Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether it is good for junior students to surf the Internet while busy studying. 55% of the students: good . a tool to study . get